Reporting :look
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Reporting :look
Hello
you told me to report to your office to talk about my artilces, so I'm here
you told me to report to your office to talk about my artilces, so I'm here
Rhiannon- Member
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Re: Reporting :look
1st article:Leane Sharif
it should contain a bit more information to fullfil the story...so the article would be better...
2nd article: it's a bit short but I think there are no other information about that...
3rd article: Ok,aproved
4th article: ok , aproved
5th article :ok,aproved
now one critic-next time try harder...don;t just sumerise the first article you bump into...but in general the articles are good and you tried , thats what counts
it should contain a bit more information to fullfil the story...so the article would be better...
2nd article: it's a bit short but I think there are no other information about that...
3rd article: Ok,aproved
4th article: ok , aproved
5th article :ok,aproved
now one critic-next time try harder...don;t just sumerise the first article you bump into...but in general the articles are good and you tried , thats what counts
Narienne Arrel- Member
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Re: Reporting :look
I was just getting the information mostly from the BWB.
I can inprove the articles after exams
I can inprove the articles after exams
Rhiannon- Member
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Re: Reporting :look
it would be lovely hun in the minwhile I'll put them in the library ...
Narienne Arrel- Member
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Join date : 2008-12-05
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