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Post  Rhiannon on Sun Jan 18, 2009 7:48 pm

Hello Smile

you told me to report to your office to talk about my artilces, so I'm here Smile
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Post  Narienne Arrel on Mon Jan 19, 2009 4:49 pm

1st article:Leane Sharif

it should contain a bit more information to fullfil the story...so the article would be better...

2nd article: it's a bit short but I think there are no other information about that...

3rd article: Ok,aproved

4th article: ok , aproved

5th article :ok,aproved

now one critic-next time try harder...don;t just sumerise the first article you bump into...but in general the articles are good and you tried , thats what counts flower hug
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Post  Rhiannon on Mon Jan 19, 2009 5:55 pm

I was just getting the information mostly from the BWB.
I can inprove the articles after exams Smile
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Post  Narienne Arrel on Mon Jan 19, 2009 8:10 pm

it would be lovely hun flower in the minwhile I'll put them in the library ...
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